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[Read along here on YouTube! Reading done by angelhalo777]
[Now translated into German here! Done by alltimeOpheliac]
[Now translated into Spanish here! Done by Pinkieshy345]

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“Ciao!” Feliciano waved happily at his friend.

He smiled and waved back before turning around and walking down the small Venice sidewalk. Feliciano sighed, his smile slowly fading. He had just spent the whole day with his friends. That’s how he spent most days. He had a nice care free life. But it wasn’t all perfect, no life was.

He then continued the other way down the narrow road to his home. He shoved his hands in his pockets as he walked, looking to all the people around him. He knew a lot of people in Venice, as he made money driving a vaporetto. Today was his day off though so he enjoyed it as much as he could.

Over the years Feliciano had grown a reputation as a generally happy guy. He tried to laugh as much as he could and make others happy, but it seemed to be never enough.

For years he had been secretly faking this all though, but he had tried his best to make it real enough. Feliciano was never really happy though. The only time he was, was those few golden moments where he somehow managed to enjoy himself.

“Buongiorno Feli!” A man waved to him.

Feliciano mustered up a smiled and gave a cheerful “buongiorno” back to him with a nod.
He frowned again though as soon as he walked away. This is how most days went for him. It was the same old thing, day in and day out. It was beginning to bore him truthfully. Bore him to death maybe. Feliciano thought over that again. Bore him to death maybe. It sounded like that what was happening here.

He stopped suddenly. He looked around the crowd of people. Someone shoved past him but he didn’t care. He knew what he wanted to, no, what he was going to do. Maybe this day won’t be so boring after all, he thought with a small smile.

He then started off quickly to his home.

When Feliciano got home he ran upstairs. It was a small home, since he lived by himself. He didn’t exactly have much family to share a home with and he denied his friends’ offers at sharing an apartment. He ran up to his room, rushing up to his room.

He flung his closest door open. He almost couldn’t believe he was doing this. He grabbed a small metal box from the back, it had been buried there for a while but he wasn’t sure how long. He dug into a pile of clothes for the key to it. He grabbed it and held it to the lock, his hand shaking with the butterflies in his stomach.

He rammed the key in and the lid popped open. In the box was an assortment of things. It was mostly random objects from his childhood that made him nostalgic. He picked up a picture of his mother. He sighed happily. The picture had been taken years ago, long before she had passed.

“Ti amo mama,” he said quietly, putting the picture back.

There was one thing specifically he was looking for though. Luckily it was on top of everything and it was in two parts.

Feliciano picked up the gun and loaded the ammo into it. He stood up, holding it firmly in his hand. He walked over to his window, looking out at the small canal below. If it was going to end here, why shouldn’t his last sight be something beautiful? The sight from his window had always been one of the few things to make him happy.

He lifted the gun to his head. He looked at the quiet canal below, taking in every detail he could.

A boat had just passed so the water had slight ripples in it. A woman carrying bags of food just went into her home with a child. The setting sun cast an orange glow on everything not blocked by another building’s shadow. The green-brown canal water was sparkling. He sighed; it was something he found himself doing a lot. He felt ready enough to go through with this.

“Pregate per me Madonna,” he whispered barely audible.

He clicked the safety off and put his finger on the trigger.

He squeezed his hand shut around the gun and-

***

“Idiota stop being so happy!”

“Wah! I’m sorry fratello!” A young auburn haired boy cried as an older boy smacked the back of his head.

The older sighed heavily, “You just need to be more serious…”

“O-Okay,” he agreed sheepishly.

He knew his brother was worried but he loved being happy and wouldn’t have it any other way.
I DO NOT OWN THE PICTURE!! FOUND HERE: carrotsoren.deviantart.com/art…

THE HETALIA THEORY BELONGS TO SailorInferno12908 and I apologize for not being able to link to the original pasta since they deactivated!

Italy died because he hid depression, leading him to suicide. This explains:
- Why he's so happy
- Why he wants to make everyone else happy (as if he didn't want them to end up like him)
- Why he runs away (killing self instead of confronting the problem)

I'm not gonna lie guys. This one was really hard to write but I really did want to write it. And sorry but I had to make him live in Venice hahaha! Okay so none of you probably know what a vaporetto is. It's pretty much a bus but it's a boat. I know people like to say Italy's a gondelier but they don't give those jobs to anyone. Seriously, you gotta go to school and train for it and they only accept like 2 or 3 a year.

Translations:
Ciao/Buongiourno: Hi/Hello
Ti amo mama: I love you mom
Pregate per me Madonna: Pray for me Mary (so apparently instead of saying like "oh my god" in Italy they say Mary but say Madonna)

AMERICA'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
ENGLAND'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
SWEDEN'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
ITALY'S THEORY: [here]
CHINA'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
RUSSIA'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
JAPAN'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
S. ITALY'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
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:iconpopstahri:
PopstAhri Featured By Owner 7 hours ago  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
This one is the saddest one I've read from your theory's so far! D: Still, it was nicely written. :)
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creeperkittytherogue Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2015  Student Interface Designer
What about the 2p hetalia?
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:iconserenedash:
SereneDash Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
The original writer of the theory never expanded on them. Personally, I don't feel like looking much into it.
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creeperkittytherogue Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2015  Student Interface Designer
Ok.
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glaceon27 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2015
Right in the feels...</3
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:iconladyotaku10:
LadyOtaku10 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
So nice!! Nice serie~~ Very interesting and different, congrats! Plus, it was very well written!
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InvisibleBanana Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2015
I'm just afraid to read another one.
This is so sad ;_;
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MaxellTheMix-Match Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I am trying to cry at this. Key Word: TRYING. Don't get me wrong now I LOVE ITALY AND EVERYTHING ABOUT HIM,both hetaliafied and real-life but I'm a girl that giggles at Laughing Jack's story, Smirks back at Jeff  and screams ''CUTE LITTLE DOGGY!'' at smile dog when he showed up on my screen (all 3 while holding a weapon AND I'm 12 yrs old) so this no affect me at all. 
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SereneDash Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I really don't care if you cry or not. Jeff the Killer is a shitty story anyway, it's hilarious to read.
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musickrazy123 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
IM FUCKING SOBBING! Why??!! :iconsobbplz:
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prettyprettycupcake Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2015  Student Writer
That preview pic is from a GerIta Doujinshi       > u >

I should know~
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UnkownGirl103 Featured By Owner May 18, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
*crying* *hugs Ita* ;^;
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:iconxximmortaltechxx:
XxImmortalTechxX Featured By Owner May 4, 2015  Student General Artist
Eeeh.... I've read sadder...
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:iconajones123:
Ajones123 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2015
It's impossible for Hetalia to be scary. Episode 23.5 for example.
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bucca2 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah I just couldn't take that seriously but it was really well written
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firepuppy1233 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2015
you should read the sequel called regret It's an amazing story and it goes into more detail of what happened it has 29 chapters. It is such a great story
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Ajones123 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2015
You could tell that it was totally fake. On creepypasta.com, they even told how they made it. MADE IT. Hence forth, they basically admitted that it was fake.
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:iconc-jpoetry:
C-jPoetry Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2015
We don't speak of that
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:iconajones123:
Ajones123 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2015
Why?
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squidward-kun Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Feliciano was a good guy that every one liked


But nobody knew he was dying inside



He promised his family he'd be alright



And then with a gunshot he left them behind
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bucca2 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
An eight-year-old boy had a panic attack

The brother he loved left and never looked back

Without a sibling, he counted on

And wanted him back just to tell him goodbye
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ToyotaKuro Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2015
oh dont do that shit

NOW i'm crying
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:iconsquidward-kun:
squidward-kun Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Sorry I just had to
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:icontoyotakuro:
ToyotaKuro Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2015
it's okay, squidward-kun ;w;

nice icon btw B)

IGIRISU
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:iconsquidward-kun:
squidward-kun Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you
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:icontoyotakuro:
ToyotaKuro Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2015
you are welcome c:

iggy is awesome
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firepuppy1233 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2015
A poem by Italy titled mask:

Every day when I face the world

I put on a smile that has everyone fooled

Why do we live in a world so cold?

You would think by now that it would all get old

Why is it that no one can see through my mask?

Is it really such a difficult task? 

No one has the skill to see through my lies

Why can't they just see the pain in my eyes?
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vamp003 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014
i want germanys.is there one for germany?
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SereneDash Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nope sorry
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vamp003 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014
aww poo..
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shadowangel33 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  Student Artist
:iconfeelsplz: btw,will you do a Switzerland one?
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:iconserenedash:
SereneDash Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Idk I've thought about writing one for him a lot but I haven't gotten around to writing it although I would love to.
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YellowVixen Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ok, i swear, that picture looks like it's by the same artist who drew the doujinshi 'dolfin'! and you made him live in venice! are you trying to make me cry?! oh wait, you are... TT~TT
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vampcute Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Student
Only Italy...could make m-me....cry so much TTOTT
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Sonicgamefan1 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Hobbyist
ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ
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juniorkat Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
;-; *dies inside* This was a beautiful story...*cries* ITA-CHANNNNNNN NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! ;-;
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North-South-Italy Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
(Awesome!!!)
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Pinkieshy345 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014
Mind if i translate this to spanish? uwu
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:iconserenedash:
SereneDash Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You can totally do that!! Just send me a link when you've done it :)
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Annikoko Featured By Owner Edited Aug 10, 2014   Artist
I didn't really get the ending so much ^-^" But I love your Creepypastas!

EDIT: I FOUND OUT! The endings underneath the *** is when they wake up in Hetalia! :D
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DerpyGIRdash Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Emote: Entranced   wow.. Emote: Entranced  I don't know what to say..... (I love your creepy pastas by the way!)
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CyanetteCupcake Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I know!! its so sad though ....imma cry..
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:iconderpygirdash:
DerpyGIRdash Featured By Owner Edited Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Same *begins to cry* Waaaah! 
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SimRandyCunninghamx2 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
May someone please explain the ending to me?
Also, great story!
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:iconserenedash:
SereneDash Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
What don't you understand? I'll be glad to explain.
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SimRandyCunninghamx2 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No, I mean, the whole thing kind of confused me... (IamsosorryIamsuchanidiot)
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SereneDash Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No, no it's okay! Do you not know what the hetalia theory is? (sorry I keep asking stuff I just want to know what I should explain)
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SimRandyCunninghamx2 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nope. XD
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