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[Read along here on YouTube! Reading done by angelhalo777]
[Now translated into German here! Done by alltimeOpheliac]
[Now translated into Spanish here! Done by Pinkieshy345]

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“Ciao!” Feliciano waved happily at his friend.

He smiled and waved back before turning around and walking down the small Venice sidewalk. Feliciano sighed, his smile slowly fading. He had just spent the whole day with his friends. That’s how he spent most days. He had a nice care free life. But it wasn’t all perfect, no life was.

He then continued the other way down the narrow road to his home. He shoved his hands in his pockets as he walked, looking to all the people around him. He knew a lot of people in Venice, as he made money driving a vaporetto. Today was his day off though so he enjoyed it as much as he could.

Over the years Feliciano had grown a reputation as a generally happy guy. He tried to laugh as much as he could and make others happy, but it seemed to be never enough.

For years he had been secretly faking this all though, but he had tried his best to make it real enough. Feliciano was never really happy though. The only time he was, was those few golden moments where he somehow managed to enjoy himself.

“Buongiorno Feli!” A man waved to him.

Feliciano mustered up a smiled and gave a cheerful “buongiorno” back to him with a nod.
He frowned again though as soon as he walked away. This is how most days went for him. It was the same old thing, day in and day out. It was beginning to bore him truthfully. Bore him to death maybe. Feliciano thought over that again. Bore him to death maybe. It sounded like that what was happening here.

He stopped suddenly. He looked around the crowd of people. Someone shoved past him but he didn’t care. He knew what he wanted to, no, what he was going to do. Maybe this day won’t be so boring after all, he thought with a small smile.

He then started off quickly to his home.

When Feliciano got home he ran upstairs. It was a small home, since he lived by himself. He didn’t exactly have much family to share a home with and he denied his friends’ offers at sharing an apartment. He ran up to his room, rushing up to his room.

He flung his closest door open. He almost couldn’t believe he was doing this. He grabbed a small metal box from the back, it had been buried there for a while but he wasn’t sure how long. He dug into a pile of clothes for the key to it. He grabbed it and held it to the lock, his hand shaking with the butterflies in his stomach.

He rammed the key in and the lid popped open. In the box was an assortment of things. It was mostly random objects from his childhood that made him nostalgic. He picked up a picture of his mother. He sighed happily. The picture had been taken years ago, long before she had passed.

“Ti amo mama,” he said quietly, putting the picture back.

There was one thing specifically he was looking for though. Luckily it was on top of everything and it was in two parts.

Feliciano picked up the gun and loaded the ammo into it. He stood up, holding it firmly in his hand. He walked over to his window, looking out at the small canal below. If it was going to end here, why shouldn’t his last sight be something beautiful? The sight from his window had always been one of the few things to make him happy.

He lifted the gun to his head. He looked at the quiet canal below, taking in every detail he could.

A boat had just passed so the water had slight ripples in it. A woman carrying bags of food just went into her home with a child. The setting sun cast an orange glow on everything not blocked by another building’s shadow. The green-brown canal water was sparkling. He sighed; it was something he found himself doing a lot. He felt ready enough to go through with this.

“Pregate per me Madonna,” he whispered barely audible.

He clicked the safety off and put his finger on the trigger.

He squeezed his hand shut around the gun and-

***

“Idiota stop being so happy!”

“Wah! I’m sorry fratello!” A young auburn haired boy cried as an older boy smacked the back of his head.

The older sighed heavily, “You just need to be more serious…”

“O-Okay,” he agreed sheepishly.

He knew his brother was worried but he loved being happy and wouldn’t have it any other way.
I DO NOT OWN THE PICTURE!! FOUND HERE: carrotsoren.deviantart.com/art…

THE HETALIA THEORY BELONGS TO ~SailorInferno12908 READ IT HERE: sailorinferno12908.deviantart.…

Italy died because he hid depression, leading him to suicide. This explains:
- Why he's so happy
- Why he wants to make everyone else happy (as if he didn't want them to end up like him)
- Why he runs away (killing self instead of confronting the problem)

I'm not gonna lie guys. This one was really hard to write but I really did want to write it. And sorry but I had to make him live in Venice hahaha! Okay so none of you probably know what a vaporetto is. It's pretty much a bus but it's a boat. I know people like to say Italy's a gondelier but they don't give those jobs to anyone. Seriously, you gotta go to school and train for it and they only accept like 2 or 3 a year.

Translations:
Ciao/Buongiourno: Hi/Hello
Ti amo mama: I love you mom
Pregate per me Madonna: Pray for me Mary (so apparently instead of saying like "oh my god" in Italy they say Mary but say Madonna)

AMERICA'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
ENGLAND'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
SWEDEN'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
ITALY'S THEORY: [here]
CHINA'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
RUSSIA'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
JAPAN'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
S. ITALY'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
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squidward-kun Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Feliciano was a good guy that every one liked


But nobody knew he was dying inside



He promised his family he'd be alright



And then with a gunshot he left them behind
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ToyotaKuro Featured By Owner 16 hours ago  New member
oh dont do that shit

NOW i'm crying
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vamp003 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014
i want germanys.is there one for germany?
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SereneDash Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nope sorry
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vamp003 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014
aww poo..
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:iconshadowangel33:
shadowangel33 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  Student Artist
:iconfeelsplz: btw,will you do a Switzerland one?
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:iconserenedash:
SereneDash Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Idk I've thought about writing one for him a lot but I haven't gotten around to writing it although I would love to.
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YellowVixen Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ok, i swear, that picture looks like it's by the same artist who drew the doujinshi 'dolfin'! and you made him live in venice! are you trying to make me cry?! oh wait, you are... TT~TT
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vampcute Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Student
Only Italy...could make m-me....cry so much TTOTT
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Sonicgamefan1 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Hobbyist
ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ
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juniorkat Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
;-; *dies inside* This was a beautiful story...*cries* ITA-CHANNNNNNN NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! ;-;
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North-South-Italy Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
(Awesome!!!)
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Pinkieshy345 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014
Mind if i translate this to spanish? uwu
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:iconserenedash:
SereneDash Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You can totally do that!! Just send me a link when you've done it :)
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Annikoko Featured By Owner Edited Aug 10, 2014   Artist
I didn't really get the ending so much ^-^" But I love your Creepypastas!

EDIT: I FOUND OUT! The endings underneath the *** is when they wake up in Hetalia! :D
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DerpyGIRdash Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Emote: Entranced   wow.. Emote: Entranced  I don't know what to say..... (I love your creepy pastas by the way!)
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CyanetteCupcake Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I know!! its so sad though ....imma cry..
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DerpyGIRdash Featured By Owner Edited Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Same *begins to cry* Waaaah! 
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SimRandyCunninghamx2 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
May someone please explain the ending to me?
Also, great story!
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:iconserenedash:
SereneDash Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
What don't you understand? I'll be glad to explain.
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SimRandyCunninghamx2 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No, I mean, the whole thing kind of confused me... (IamsosorryIamsuchanidiot)
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SereneDash Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No, no it's okay! Do you not know what the hetalia theory is? (sorry I keep asking stuff I just want to know what I should explain)
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SimRandyCunninghamx2 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nope. XD
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:iconserenedash:
SereneDash Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah well it would have been smart to read the description then as I've put a link to the original theory there. 
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SimRandyCunninghamx2 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh I did read the description just didn't see the link.
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:iconserenedash:
SereneDash Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah alright! Do you understand now or would you still like me to explain?
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AnimeFanGirl1229 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Student Artist
I Cried!! Because Feliciano Should Not Die (Suicide) From His Depression!!Romano (Cries) [V4]  But Other Wise Than The Crying Part I Loved It!!!Momo Kisaragi (Big Smile) [V5] 
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Italy-Fan-50 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Student
;u;
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LunarRaevyn Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I smiled while reading this, because I know depression like this. I was ready to end it, but then, I began to read more often, usually to avoid talking and false smiles. Reading, writing, and connecting to the characters kept me away from my depression, and I felt happy again.

I smiled because he, at least, is now happy.
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SavannahWrites Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Is it bad that although I feel a tinge of sadness, I'm actually smiling at most of these?
Just...the thought of seeing misfortune in characters I've known for so long makes me cheerful
I'm insane, aren't I?
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ILIKEFANDOMS Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm crying but.. I need to keep reading.
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ShadowHunter2002 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
These stories are so sad........




WHY DO I LOVE THEM SO FLIPPING MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 
These are amazing stories are very enjoyable to read!
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SereneDash Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you enjoyed them!
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ShadowHunter2002 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
You're great at writing- why shouldn't I enjoy them? :D (Big Grin) 
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SereneDash Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah thank you ^_^"
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ShadowHunter2002 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
No problem. (030)
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adrianarosabell Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
I loved this story it was quite sad though I think Russia's and Sweden's are the gloomiest  this one was very lamentable too, I loved your story your English is fantastic and have a magnificent way to describe sorrowful and confuse feelings of your characters and it looks like you can understand a little about those dark feelings that lead us to death, loved your stories +fav 
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SereneDash Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much it means a lot (: I'm so glad you felt that way about it! I'm always worried I'm not getting the character's feelings across but yeah I do understand those feelings quite a bit so that did help. Thanks again <3
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adrianarosabell Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
don't mention it was nothing ( well just my feelings but you know what I mean like no problem)
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MrsBraun92 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist
Woow awesome! Hey do you know the other North Italian one? This where Italy, Germany and Japan are on a island. They got nothing to eat and then Germany and Japan decided to eat him, because he is the weakest. When Italy was sleeping they eating him and he wakes up. That one was scared, too. I found it on youtube. 
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SereneDash Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah who doesn't know that one? I did a parody comic of it (because I have to make everything into a joke XD) that one wasn't too bad to me, but I mean I read some fucked up creepypasta so I've read waaaaay worse XD
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fluffytaiwan Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
so they died and reincarnated? i'm confused
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SereneDash Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yup
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:iconhaylee759:
Haylee759 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
FEELS I HAS THEM
Will you do a Canada one? Please?
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:iconserenedash:
SereneDash Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
but there is this that someone wrote in case I never get around to writing on for him
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SereneDash Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't know if I will ^_^"
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Haylee759 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Oh ok.
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Wolfp3lt Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
This is really good!

I have a theory about Italy for myself, a solider during war who wanted to go home. He was killed in action. It would explain why he wanted peace.
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