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[Now read it here in German! Translated by alltimeOpheliac]

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The day was beautiful. Cherry blossoms bloomed in the yard, a light breeze scattering some on green grass and landing in a small koi pond. The fish jumped and swam to the landing petals, thinking it was food, but were quickly bored and left. The forest around the small house was swaying lightly.

Despite the beautiful scenery, not all was well in the Honda household. Kiku was a young man, honorable to his family. Many young girls liked him but he didn’t like any of them back. His parents thought it was time for him to remove is bachelor status.

Kiku walked through the paper screen doors, looking curiously at the people kneeling at the small table. His parents were laughing along with a pretty young girl. She wore a light pink kimono decorated with golden flowers and a light blue waist band tied in a bow in the back.

“Oh Kiku!” His father smiled, “Meet Ai.”

Kiku bowed slightly and moved to sit across from the girl. She smiled at him, moving a black strand of hair behind his ear, “It is a pleasure to meet you, I have heard much about you.”

He nodded. “Hello, I am looking forward to knowing you.” He wasn’t thrilled at all though. He wished his parents had stopped inviting girls over.

“Kiku,” his mother smiled happily, “We have great news!”

“What is it mother?” He questioned.

It seemed as if she couldn’t contain herself. “We have an arranged marriage for you and Ai!”

Kiku blinked. He then smiled crookedly, trying to keep himself from shouting in anger, “That is wonderful.” His parents seemed delighted. Ai smiled at him, malice hiding underneath.

2 MONTHS LATER

Ai and Kiku were married now, living together in their own house for a month now. It was not what Kiku wanted. He wasn’t happy here at all. Ai kept advancing on him but he pushed her away each time. Now was one of those times.

Ai pushed Kiku through the bedroom doorway, “Come one Kiku baby, just once. Please for me?”

“N-No!” He said instantly. He didn’t love her at all.

She walked forward, slipping a sleeve off one shoulder, and forcing Kiku to move back towards the bed. “I’m your wife!” She whined, “Let me have this! Lust is shared between those married! Don’t you want kids?!”

Kiku kept his mouth shut. The last time he answered that question he got slapped. Ai pushed him and he fell down on the bed, he winced slightly on impact. She kneeled over him, legs apart over his crotch.

“I’ve been patient for long enough!” She nearly yelled. “We’re doing this now!”

She tore her kimono off and Kiku’s cheeks flushed bright red. He tried directing his gaze to her face, riddled with determination. She tore open his robe and he kept in a small squeak. No! This isn’t what he wanted! She started to undress him.

Hi! You're confused yes? Sorry for the interruption (don't you dare skip over this!). It's come to my attention no one reads my descriptions. I work the hardest on those, not the story. I want you, yes you the reader, to go read the one on the America pasta and Russia pasta. Any more questions can be asked in the comments. Thank you!

Kiku suddenly grabbed her wrist. Ai looked to him shocked. “P-Please Ai,” He said quietly, “If we are to do this, let me undress myself.”

She smiled then, standing up now. “Good! Nice to see you man up!”

He smiled, standing up too. He pulled his robe around him again. “Please excuse me one moment.”

She smirked, ready for pleasure. “Take as long as you need.”

He bowed slightly and walked from the room all the way to the back room where miscellaneous things were kept. When he got to the room he sighed heavily, feeling slightly dirty. She had never gone that far before. He looked around the room. He spotted a box mounted on the wall.

Kiku didn’t like the idea but there was no other option. He walked to the box, undoing the latches. Inside the cool metal reflected his grim expression. He took the object out, handling it gracefully. He had never used it but it was used in his family as a sign of power.

He held it firmly, taking deep breaths. He knew others had chosen this fate and it was a great dishonorable blemish but what choice was there other than to suffer? He closed his eyes, ready for what was to come. What would he feel like? He dismissed the thought. He swiftly dug the katana into his flesh, right under his rib cage.

He let out a wheeze, pain attacking him instantly. He twisted it, causing a hurricane of pain within him. Tears pooled in his eyes. His knees gave way under him and he fell with a loud thud, gripping the sword still. He slowly took it out, dragging blood and guts with it.

I am forever sorry my family, he thought sorrowfully.

He heard footsteps rushing. Through blurred vision he saw the door open and Ai step in. She screamed. Kiku dug the katana back in him and felt it poke out his back side. He closed his eyes, mind drifting away.

Her name meant love but she only wanted lust.

***

“No stop it!” A young boy with raven black hair squeaked, wrapping his arms around himself.

Another boy with long black hair tied in a ponytail huffed. “I don’t get you! You won’t even let your big brother hug you!”

“I don’t want a hug,” the smaller replied quietly, he bowed slightly, “I am sorry.”
The older smiled slightly. “You should learn to open up more. And don’t say sorry so much!”

He bowed again, “I am sorry…”

“What did I say!?” The other nearly yelled at him.

The younger squeaked again, clamping his mouth shut. He was about to apologize again, but didn’t know why.
I DO NOT OWN THE IMAGE! FOUND HERE: www.fanpop.com/clubs/hetalia-j…

THE HETALIA THEORY BELONGS TO SailorInferno12908 and I apologize for not being able to link to the original pasta since they deactivated!

Japan died in an unhappy forced marriage and committed seppuku (ceremonial suicide) This explains:
- His introvertedness
- His insecurity
- Why he apologizes often

Who liked my little message?! I hope you all read it. If you're reading this now comment. Seriously. You have no idea how much these descriptions mean to me. I really do work hard on these for you guys. It's like an after reading thingy like in school. Okay bad comparison. Anyway, I can seriously tell who reads this and who doesn't by the comments.

AMERICA'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
ENGLAND'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
SWEDEN'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
N. ITALY'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
CHINA'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
RUSSIA'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
JAPAN'S THEORY: [here]
S. ITALY'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…


[EDIT] It's been like what, an hour? Two? Since I posted this and I'm thrilled with the responses! Thank you all so much! I love you all!
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vamp003 Featured By Owner 6 days ago
do one for germany plz!
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SereneDash Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm probably not writing any more of these sorry
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NeonDoomNinja Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2015
((Yes, I read the discription.)) I'm making myself read all of these, even if it kills me.
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BriannaFreeman Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015
Where's Germany's theory?
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:iconserenedash:
SereneDash Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I didn't write one for him.
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:iconbriannafreeman:
BriannaFreeman Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2015
Oh.  Okay, when will you write one for him and everyone else?
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:iconserenedash:
SereneDash Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I wasn't planning on it. I'm not really into Hetalia anymore. The Romano one was the last one. I have tiny tiny bits of ones for a few other characters so maybe I'll post those things as they are, all incomplete and what not.
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BriannaFreeman Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2015
Okay.
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EsmeSoustin Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
i like reading the description it tells how the characters die when i don't understand in the story.
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prettyprettycupcake Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2015  Student Writer
I thought he was going to be r*ped and m*lested as a child.

But, I still love this story~! ;A;
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Bunnygoblin Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2015
I thought that to.
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Eyeless-jack10 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I always read the description...if I have a question sometimes it's answer is provided in the Description
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athiestexcept4fandom Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I always read the description:) (Smile) , they basically explain why you chose this or that.
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Sabielovesfrozen Featured By Owner May 20, 2015   Writer
OH THE PAIN, THE SORROW
THE PAIN THE SORROW
EVERY SINGLE ONE OF THESE I READ BRINGS ON A NEW FEELS ATTACK AND TEARS
WHY
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hanachi-san Featured By Owner May 18, 2015  Student General Artist
I was looking for references because I was drawing Japan when I came across this.
I'll change his weapon in my manga to a gun. TT^TT
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EverLastingLuv Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Poor Japan. It all makes sense now. So far I've only read America's and Japan's. But holy goddamn they were so sad.
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LessThanAShadow Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Me before reading the story: *looks at pic* "Aww, nice fan art!"

Me after reading the story: *looks at pic* "Kiku Honda put that katana down right now! Don't do it, man!"
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hanachi-san Featured By Owner May 18, 2015  Student General Artist
Are you reading my mind? XD
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:iconlessthanashadow:
LessThanAShadow Featured By Owner May 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes
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caramelldansengirl25 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Danisnotonfire: FEELS the feels Llama Emoji-15 (Sniff) [V1] tears Pikachu Crying Plz Llama Emoji-08 (Crying) [V1] Crying Death the Kid Emote Frozen - Elsa Crying Icon crying :crying: rvmp Miuna Crying Icon [EXO] Kris ''Legit'' Crying Emoticon SpongeBob (Cries) Exo : Crying Kai Too Much?  I think not...Every time i read the stories: this happens. *sigh* 
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IsolatedPsycho Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Read the description, like always!
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RessurectedNightmare Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i allways read descs, unless i have a headache or am really wanting to sleep XD
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hikarulover4242564 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I READ THE DESCRIPTION!! ALWAYS DO ALWAYS WILL!
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Haveanicedream8 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I swear I laughed so much when you put the description in the story... I read the description!! 
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XXiForgotMyNameXX Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014
I don't know why but I thought but I thought Japan was going to kill Ai! My predictions are always wrong... but then again this is theory, forgot about that part in the title Facepalm 
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SereneDash Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
haha tis alright~
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XXiForgotMyNameXX Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014
Hehe... thanks I'm known for overlooking stuff :3
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WerpDerp Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014
.... japan come with me!!!!!
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ComplexReality Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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ComplexReality Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I see ai kinda like the evil one in the song
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CatarinaWaterFrost Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014
You are correct, my fellow Brony! A Reader-Chan should be Princess Cadence!  
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Xerazu Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*sobbing grossly*
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JSOkami Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014
On Youtube, I'm married to a Japan and I have a kid with him. He's the one who thought about kids not me. :iconnosebleedingplz:
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SereneDash Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Um... what?
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JSOkami Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014
On youtube, in a Japan RP me and Japan had gotten married and he's the one who thought about kids unlike the creepypasta. :D
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JSOkami Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014
That's what ya get when you want kids from a man who doesn't.
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Fandom-Daydreams Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Student Artist
Honestly this fills alot of blanks in Hetalia
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Shadow-RougeShadouge Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014   General Artist
Dude, this is so goddamn awesome! Still need to read the rest! this my fav so far! dude, just, this is amazing!
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MyDepictionOfFiction Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I like the story, but I also have my own theory! I reckon the reason for Kiku's " No touchy-feely" rule is because Ai wanted to "get physical" and that lead to his suicide. Basically, he associates touching with death and pain.
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pandoragal Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014
Good story, although as a bit of advice the waistband you referenced in the third paragraph is known as an obi or obi sash.
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MyDepictionOfFiction Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Obi wan kenobi?
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Kiniro-chan Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I always read the descriptions~ 
There's always additional info in it or just the creators giving out a piece of their mind.
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jolynn1012 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I read the descriptions to know what everything meant. Also, WHY KIKU?!
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YourLocalCosplayers Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist
I read your descriptions. It helps me with me being a blonde and not knowing what is going on XD
-loved that note in the middle of the story tho-
keep up the good work
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SereneDash Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you ^.^
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Spiritmist16 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I read your descriptions! I feel bad for you, since you took the time to write them, we should read them!
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SereneDash Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
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CelesteFoxDemon Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
This was pretty good! ^_^
Why Kiku?! WHY? Q_Q
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itachilover1003 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I always read your lovely descriptions! >0<
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