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[Now you can read along here! Reading done by angelhalo777]
[Read it here in German! Translated by the lovely alltimeOpheliac]

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Alfred washed out his mouth, spitting brown water back into the bathroom sink. He glanced back at the toilet but decided against going back until after dinner.

He wiped his mouth and threw out the paper towel, missing the trash can. He sighed, picking it up again. As he bent over his sweat shirt hung as if it were three sizes too big but it wasn't. As he threw out the paper towel he grimly thought about the red sweatshirt hanging on his shoulders loosely. It had once fit him, but that was when he was fat. I'm still fat, he thought, having a strong urge to vomit.

"Alfred!" His mom called.

"Yeah mom?" He answered, forgetting about his weight for a moment.

She appeared in the doorway of the bathroom. "Can you walk to the store and pick up a gallon of milk? We just ran out."

He nodded, "Sure." There was a mini mart a block away so it would be a quick trip.

His mom handed him a twenty dollar bill. "If you're hungry feel free to buy something for yourself."

"Okay," he said taking the money, shoving it in his pocket. He wouldn't buy anything for himself to eat.

His mom smiled sadly, watching Alfred walk from the bathroom to down the hall. She couldn't help but look at his face every time they talked. His cheeks were sunken in and hollow, she knew he had lost weight but couldn't tell how much under his sagging clothing. She wanted to say something but didn't know how and it didn't help his father hadn't noticed it.

Alfred went to his room, grabbing his coat. It was cold and snowing outside and he did not want to be cold. He put it on over his sweatshirt and put on his scarf and hat.

"I'll be back in ten," he called, heading out the door now.

He was hit with a chilling breeze and pulled his scarf up over his nose. He glared at the snow on the ground hatefully. I freaking hate the cold, he growled in his mind. The walk to the store was short and he was grateful the building had heating.

He grabbed a gallon of milk, the jug feeling like a hundred pounds in his hands. He looked at the sugary snacks around the store in colorful plastic. He desperately wanted to buy one. Just… one… He hesitantly grabbed a small package of cookies. He went to the counter, excitedly thinking about the cookies in his hand. He threw everything onto the counter, fishing the money from his pocket. He paid and left with the heavy bag in his hand.

Half way home he stopped, sitting on a bench. He grabbed the package of cookies and greedily ate them. He instantly regretted it. His stomach growled at him, demanding more food but he ignored it. He stood up, throwing the wrapper of the cookies into the waste bin next to the bench, and continued home.

He wanted to hit himself. How dare he eat those! He knew he would gain weight from it. He couldn't wait to go home to throw it up. He didn't care if his mom had just made dinner, he would do it. The thoughts of the cookies consumed his mind. He wanted to eat more but wanted to throw it all up.

The bag in his hand suddenly became heavier than it already was. He dropped it with a loud thud. He ripped his scarf away, instantly regretting it as coldness consumed his face and neck. He fell to his knees, not caring anymore, and shoved his finger down his throat. The snow on the ground instantly became a light brown but as he continued to vomit it became darker, darker until it became black in the moonlight.

Alfred was shaking, staring at the dark snow below him. He couldn't stop shaking, his weak arms barely holding him up in the snow. His glasses fell off into the dark snow. He picked them up with a trembling hand and brushed away his blonde hair, placing them on his face.

The glass was now a dark color, stained with the vomit in the snow. He glanced down the street. The street light cast through the glass, revealing the black color was actually red. Alfred blinked.

"No…" he whispered terrified.

His throat burned. His heart beat madly against his chest. What was happening?! He looked at the dark snow, now recognizing the reddish-brown color. It made him sick. He vomited again, this time from the sick thoughts and not because he wanted to.

He choked. Something was terribly wrong. He wanted to stop. He wanted to go home, give his mom the gallon of milk and eat and keep eating until his was full. Then go to bed without throwing up.

Something forced out of his throat again. The dark snow became darker. Thick red liquid dripped out of Alfred's mouth. There was nothing left in his stomach. How could this be happening? Where was this coming from?

He collapsed in the snow, face falling into the dark snow. He inhaled the ghastly smell, snow melting into his mouth and nose and eyes. He closed his eyes, regretting everything.

***

A small boy woke up. Where was he…?

It was a sunny field of tall grass and almost nothing else. In the distance he could hear a river. He stood up, brushing off his white gown with small chubby hands. His blonde hair moved with the breeze lightly.

He followed the river for what seemed like hours. He reached a town. He moved through the people on the streets, none of them noticing him, and hid behind a barrel as horses pulled a carriage through the streets.

In the seat of the carriage he saw a blonde man with thick eyebrows.
I DO NOT OWN THE PICTURE!! FOUND HERE: nenema.deviantart.com/art/APH-…

THE HETALIA THEORY BELONGS TO SailorInferno12908! I apologize for not being able to link to their original pasta since they deactivated!

Okay so if you don't know what's happening then the Hetalia Theory is that the nations were human, died, and the Hetalia world is purgatory. America had died of anorexia nervosa, which explains a lot actually.
- Why he responded negatively when England said he would get fat
- Why he hates cold weather
- Why he tried so hard to find other methods of weight lose

And in case you didn't know, at the end he dies because you destroy your throat when you throw up. You know how your stomach is filled with acid? And you throw up what's in your stomach? Some of the acid comes up to and slowly burns through your throat, which is why your throat burns when you throw up. So basically he had done it enough times and his body became so weak it destroyed his throat and got into his lungs.

I hope you all like this, this is my first creepypasta.

AMERICA'S THEORY: [here]
ENGLAND'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
SWEDEN'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
N. ITALY'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
CHINA'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
RUSSIA'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
JAPAN'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…
S. ITALY'S THEORY: serenedash.deviantart.com/art/…


[EDIT] This has over 200 favorites?! You guy's are too kind to me ;-;

[2ND EDIT] :iconshadowstar1021: drew a picture of this :heart: THANK YOU!!! shadowstar1021.deviantart.com/…

[3RD EDIT] This story has become so popular thank you everyone <333 DeadJosey on YouTube has done a narration of the story and you can read along!!! Hopefully it'll add to the dramaticness of it heh heh
www.youtube.com/watch?v=4YEknw…
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:icondanteelzhido:
DanteElZhido Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2015  New Deviant
Wow, i like but poor America even so I think most tender xD I'm sick uwu
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GeekGirl749 Featured By Owner Edited Aug 22, 2015  New Deviant
I love these stupid question but how do you add stuff to your faverites
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SereneDash Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
There's a button on the right side of the page with a star that says "add to favorites"
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GeekGirl749 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2015  New Deviant
Thanx
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TicciJeffrey Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2015  Student Artist
I'm asking you if I traduced this theory for my Creepypasta's book on Wattpad:
www.wattpad.com/story/27360851…
Mad I'll put it in the English version creepypasta's book soon:)
Can I?
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SereneDash Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello! I think it's great you want to put my story in your book but I don't feel comfortable with you posting my stories on another site. I'm really sorry but I'd like to keep it on dA. 
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TicciJeffrey Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2015  Student Artist
Ok, sorry!
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TicciJeffrey Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2015  Student Artist
Hello! I'm an Italian Creepypasta fan
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hinamori415 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Q~Q Alfred... Why did you starve yourself to death, your breaking my heart... Q~Q
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Bunnygoblin Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2015
It would make an interesting story separate from this were reader helps Al with his anorexia. I would love to reader it.
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SereneDash Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't write character X reader sorry
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Bunnygoblin Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2015
Understood. Hopefully some day someone else will right it. I like your stuff by the way.
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PrinceCheezburger Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I am literally crying right now. You definitely captured having an eating disorder accurately.
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SereneDash Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Did I really? I was really worried I wouldn't have.
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PrinceCheezburger Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Though I didn't have bulimia, I did suffer from eating and body issues before. I would withhold food to punish myself for "offenses," (e.g. getting a B on a test), and the amount withheld would vary by the severity of said offense, varying from cutting back a few calories to even not eating the whole day. I wasn't emaciated or anything, but the doctor said that I was behind on my growth and was even going backwards. Luckily, I was lucky enough to recover, but there are still times I am tempted to not eat or call myself fat.
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SereneDash Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sorry to hear that. I have pretty bad depression and a symptom of it for me is starving myself but I've never had bulimia or anorexia so I wouldn't really know. It's good to hear you recovered though!
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PrinceCheezburger Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't want to play doctor here, but vomiting blood like that is probably from a rupture, either in the esophagus or the stomach. Esophageal rupture (Boerhaave's syndrome) is more common.
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SereneDash Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I was talking to my mom (who's a nurse) and she said in extreme cases this can happen due to vomitting from the stomach acid burning through the throat. 
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PrinceCheezburger Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
My goodness, that sounds terrifying. I read the description on this, and it sounds even more painful. That's a horrible way to go for anyone.
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SereneDash Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Indeed.
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diamondnightmare Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this shits pretty cool. not really scary or sad, but pretty cool. make more of this. its awesome.
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BriannaFreeman Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015
I believe what you're talking about is bulimia nervosa.
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VioletMatrix Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2015
this... made my eyes tear up... i have a friend who was sort of acting like this, trying to starve herself and vomit out her food. I'm glad she's okay now but this brought back memories 
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AllenLJones Featured By Owner May 31, 2015
Sad and depressing
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:iconbelarus-natasha:
Belarus-natasha Featured By Owner May 27, 2015
Sorry. Not scary. But very intresting. Enter under different category and 9/10
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SereneDash Featured By Owner May 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
It wasn't meant to be scary. It's just a dark story.
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Belarus-natasha Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2015
Sorry. But if "dark" was a cat agora, 10/10
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:iconbriannafreeman:
BriannaFreeman Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015
Aren't all creepypastas dark?
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pokemontrainergirl Featured By Owner May 2, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Fuck, now I feel like puking...
And when I read the description, I felt worse...
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MagicGeek567 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
When you need to not.
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TrillaForced Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015  Student General Artist
Funny thing is, the same thing happened to my best friend. HIS NAME WAS ALFRED F. JONES.... and he looked just like America and he died a year before Hetalia came out...
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PrinceCheezburger Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
That's a certainly interesting circumstance... CLEARLY A CONSPIRACY
I'm sorry for your loss, though.
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TrillaForced Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2015  Student General Artist
Thanks bro :3
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MelisaSmith Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
If you want a good way to look at it it could be that he died then became America in the series 
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:icontrillaforced:
TrillaForced Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2015  Student General Artist
Maybe ILLUMINATI CONFIRMED *explosions* lol jk
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MelisaSmith Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
YOU ARE FRIENDS WITH A COUNTRY I WILL NEVER FORGET THIS
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TrillaForced Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015  Student General Artist
._.
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MelisaSmith Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
It's okay it may sound kind of creepy but it just means that I think you are totally awesome
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TrillaForced Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015  Student General Artist
Oh cool~! ^-^
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MelisaSmith Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah I mean that sounds really awesome
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Belarus-natasha Featured By Owner May 27, 2015
Lucky you. Now the whole world knows your freind.
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TrillaForced Featured By Owner May 30, 2015  Student General Artist
Yep :I
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Belarus-natasha Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2015
R.i.p. at least he is beloved by many.
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TrillaForced Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015  Student General Artist
YUP
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Belarus-natasha Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015
Hey! He is many a fans fav!
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TrillaForced Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015  Student General Artist
Your statement made no sense
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Belarus-natasha Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015
Oh well, that's what I get for using the voice command. I meant he is many fans favorite person.
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Sabielovesfrozen Featured By Owner May 20, 2015   Writer
REALLY?! WOAH
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TrillaForced Featured By Owner May 21, 2015  Student General Artist
yes it is kind of strange
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Sabielovesfrozen Featured By Owner May 21, 2015   Writer
I wonder if he's the one who became the America we know today......
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